Thomas Ovans explores the often bizarre worlds conjured up by P W Bridgman’s intriguing poetry
A Lamb
P W Bridgman
Ekstasis Editions
ISBN 978 1 77171 273 6
120pp $23.95
PW Bridgman is a Canadian poet whose work I had not previously encountered. This is not entirely surprising since A Lamb is his debut collection. The London Grip poetry editor informs me, however, that Bridgman’s work has appeared in the Winter 2015 and Spring 2018 postings of London Grip New Poetry and the reader may care to turn to these examples which will give illustrate his distinctive style of narrative poem better than will be possible the via short extracts quoted in this review.
Although Bridgman does indeed have a distinctive style, he is explicit and generous throughout the collection in acknowledging some debt to works by an intriguing array of other poets – for instance Christopher Smart, Sinead Morrissey, Seamus Heaney, Lawrence Ferlinghetti , Al Purdy, Simon Armitage and William Blake. Elsewhere he broadens his sources of inspiration to include lyricists such as George Gershwin, Joni Mitchell and George Formby. The diversity of these influences suggests that Bridgman is a poet who thinks very laterally indeed.
A Lamb immediately makes an impression as a beautifully produced book (although I am not sure why it is named for the shortest and most untypical poem it contains). Its 120 pages contain only about 40 poems (in addition to a Foreword and other supporting material) and hence the average poem length is around two-and-a-half pages. In these relatively long poems Bridgman tells stories, sets scenes and develops ideas, often using quite plain language but most imaginatively put together in many varieties of free verse. His inventiveness is well summed up in his declaration that a poet
... resembles a Manager of
City Works with a free rein and a framed Poetic Licence
perched on the corner of his desk in City Hall. A poet
can make things happen through writerly alchemy.
With a few keystrokes – and without the need
of a work order, budget or authorizing minute from
City Council – a poet can refigure this city’s street plan
These lines come from “At the corner of Triumph and Pandora” – the in-joke being that these two Vancouver streets are in fact parallel.
The collection begins with a character-based sequence “Jim Begins to Consider Himself”. We eavesdrop on, its protagonist in a variety of situations. Here we are at the passport office
“Occupation?”
Man of Vision.
“You can’t put that”
Entrepreneur.
“Nor that.”
Financier. Magnate. Tycoon.
“I’m not even going to comment.”
Venture capitalist?
“For fuck’s sake.”
Venture socialist? Sorry ...
Here we see Bridgman’s knack for authentic sounding dialogue in which small jokes may be buried. In another character-based sequence “The Julian Capstick Poems” about an ex-husband resuming a single life he allows his narrator to reflect that ‘Beth, You Is Not My Woman Now’. Capstick also shares the author’s gift for close and quirky observation: noticing that a shop assistant wears a home-made badge bearing the name Chloë he is moved to ask himself ‘Who knew a Dymo labeller could do an umlaut?’
Throughout the collection Bridgman takes similarly wry and imaginative notice of the trivialities of everyday life. A bishop trims his nails and ‘crescent moons accumulate, one by one like pardoned sins, on the rubber floor mat at his feet.’ Mundane details are particularly poignant when they are observed in the presence of death. After a wife collapses in the bathroom her husband observes
The shower curtain, torn from its rail,
must be replaced.
The quotidian will not yield
even to this, the greatest of calamities.
The effect upon those who are present when such calamities happen is skilfully encapsulated in “Mr MacGregor’s Overcoat” as ‘Straightaway, the warmth leaves the room / along with the her of her, more sensed than seen.’
One of Bridgman’s most effective poetic devices is clever use of repetition or echoing . The first part of “We Strive to Dismiss their Prejudices, Mostly with Good Humour” begins
“Eat only acumen,” Irena’s father says over breakfast,
meaning the albumen ...
A little later in the poem, the narrator, having duly pushed the egg yolks to one side of his plate, reflects that
A birth control prescription has pushed Irena’s to one side, too,
acumen and all ...
and adds ‘God, or someone please help us’ if Irena’s (presumably Roman Catholic) parents ever find out. In another distorted echo, Irena’s father mistakenly uses ‘Vulva’ as the name of his much-prized car – the same type of vehicle to which Jim, the central character in the book’s opening poem, pays homage: ‘In the name of the Volvo, the mortgage / and the cave-aged Pont -l’Évêque.’
The recurring-word trick is used again in “No Writers Were Harmed in the Making of this Whiskey” (readers will have seen by now that Bridgman doesn’t stint in the matter of titles) which begins with two old men settling down for a quiet drink. One of them
... twists the bottle cap slowly
and with exaggerated care
like a sapper extracting a fuse cylinder
from an unexploded artillery shell.
Six pages later the poem’s apparently whimsical story has turned to something much darker and it is a shocking and tragic ending that is waiting to be discovered ‘like an unexploded artillery shell.’
A more concentrated and striking use of echoing involves the word ‘grievance’ in “Out of the Bar and into the Black Belfast Night’. It begins simply enough ‘It’s Christmas Eve / and we’ve lined up our grievances again…’ The reader expects some amplification of this remark; but instead the same empty thoughts come round and around again, pushing obsession almost to breaking point.
Arrayed as empty glasses they are, our grievances
in this tatty bar in the Ormeau Road
...
Every Christmas Eve we meet here;
and we line them up, our grievances, here, just like this.
Just like the empty glasses we’ve strung along the edge of this table.
This is what we do. We line up our grievances and we compare them.
A good many of the poems – for example “Carrying on after the Carrying On”, “Lych Gate and Yews”, “Grace and Disgrace” – present sad family stories often centred on one particular family member who is especially dysfunctional in his/her own way. While these work well as individual pieces it could be argued that there are rather too many them. Around the middle of the collection I was beginning to feel a bit overwhelmed by a relentless accumulation of harrowing stories. It made a welcome change when the mood shifted and some of the dysfunctional individuals were given a chance to speak for themselves. In “Empowered” a homeless sixty-eight year old amuses himself by walking out into the street in front of cars and making the drivers hit the brakes
For one long second
I’m the most important person
in their world.
In the worst way
they want me alive and well.
Yeah me. Imagine that.
An underdog also gets the last laugh in the throwaway give-away line at the end of the threatening looking and ominous-sounding prose poem “Ad Te Clamamus, Exsules Filii Hevae”.
A much bigger departure from domestic drama occurs in “Safari Not Supported But Your Prayer Is Important To Us” in which a couple of hackers are trying to locate God on the internet.
Y’know, think about it. It can’t be just http. God must use an https.
You’re probably right.
And definitely not dot com.
When it turns out that ‘SAFARI CANNOT ESTABLISH A SECURE CONNECTION TO THE SERVER WWW.GOD.ORG”’ there is still some theological consolation to be drawn
Well at least it’s not saying He doesn’t exist.
That’s true. In fact it’s sort of acknowledging that He does exist
or at least that His server exists
Evidently the sky is not the limit of Bridgman’s poetic imagination.
London Grip Poetry Review – P W Bridgman
February 25, 2019 by Michael Bartholomew-Biggs • books, poetry reviews, year 2019 • Tags: books, poetry, Thomas Ovans • 0 Comments
Thomas Ovans explores the often bizarre worlds conjured up by P W Bridgman’s intriguing poetry
PW Bridgman is a Canadian poet whose work I had not previously encountered. This is not entirely surprising since A Lamb is his debut collection. The London Grip poetry editor informs me, however, that Bridgman’s work has appeared in the Winter 2015 and Spring 2018 postings of London Grip New Poetry and the reader may care to turn to these examples which will give illustrate his distinctive style of narrative poem better than will be possible the via short extracts quoted in this review.
Although Bridgman does indeed have a distinctive style, he is explicit and generous throughout the collection in acknowledging some debt to works by an intriguing array of other poets – for instance Christopher Smart, Sinead Morrissey, Seamus Heaney, Lawrence Ferlinghetti , Al Purdy, Simon Armitage and William Blake. Elsewhere he broadens his sources of inspiration to include lyricists such as George Gershwin, Joni Mitchell and George Formby. The diversity of these influences suggests that Bridgman is a poet who thinks very laterally indeed.
A Lamb immediately makes an impression as a beautifully produced book (although I am not sure why it is named for the shortest and most untypical poem it contains). Its 120 pages contain only about 40 poems (in addition to a Foreword and other supporting material) and hence the average poem length is around two-and-a-half pages. In these relatively long poems Bridgman tells stories, sets scenes and develops ideas, often using quite plain language but most imaginatively put together in many varieties of free verse. His inventiveness is well summed up in his declaration that a poet
These lines come from “At the corner of Triumph and Pandora” – the in-joke being that these two Vancouver streets are in fact parallel.
The collection begins with a character-based sequence “Jim Begins to Consider Himself”. We eavesdrop on, its protagonist in a variety of situations. Here we are at the passport office
Here we see Bridgman’s knack for authentic sounding dialogue in which small jokes may be buried. In another character-based sequence “The Julian Capstick Poems” about an ex-husband resuming a single life he allows his narrator to reflect that ‘Beth, You Is Not My Woman Now’. Capstick also shares the author’s gift for close and quirky observation: noticing that a shop assistant wears a home-made badge bearing the name Chloë he is moved to ask himself ‘Who knew a Dymo labeller could do an umlaut?’
Throughout the collection Bridgman takes similarly wry and imaginative notice of the trivialities of everyday life. A bishop trims his nails and ‘crescent moons accumulate, one by one like pardoned sins, on the rubber floor mat at his feet.’ Mundane details are particularly poignant when they are observed in the presence of death. After a wife collapses in the bathroom her husband observes
The effect upon those who are present when such calamities happen is skilfully encapsulated in “Mr MacGregor’s Overcoat” as ‘Straightaway, the warmth leaves the room / along with the her of her, more sensed than seen.’
One of Bridgman’s most effective poetic devices is clever use of repetition or echoing . The first part of “We Strive to Dismiss their Prejudices, Mostly with Good Humour” begins
A little later in the poem, the narrator, having duly pushed the egg yolks to one side of his plate, reflects that
and adds ‘God, or someone please help us’ if Irena’s (presumably Roman Catholic) parents ever find out. In another distorted echo, Irena’s father mistakenly uses ‘Vulva’ as the name of his much-prized car – the same type of vehicle to which Jim, the central character in the book’s opening poem, pays homage: ‘In the name of the Volvo, the mortgage / and the cave-aged Pont -l’Évêque.’
The recurring-word trick is used again in “No Writers Were Harmed in the Making of this Whiskey” (readers will have seen by now that Bridgman doesn’t stint in the matter of titles) which begins with two old men settling down for a quiet drink. One of them
Six pages later the poem’s apparently whimsical story has turned to something much darker and it is a shocking and tragic ending that is waiting to be discovered ‘like an unexploded artillery shell.’
A more concentrated and striking use of echoing involves the word ‘grievance’ in “Out of the Bar and into the Black Belfast Night’. It begins simply enough ‘It’s Christmas Eve / and we’ve lined up our grievances again…’ The reader expects some amplification of this remark; but instead the same empty thoughts come round and around again, pushing obsession almost to breaking point.
A good many of the poems – for example “Carrying on after the Carrying On”, “Lych Gate and Yews”, “Grace and Disgrace” – present sad family stories often centred on one particular family member who is especially dysfunctional in his/her own way. While these work well as individual pieces it could be argued that there are rather too many them. Around the middle of the collection I was beginning to feel a bit overwhelmed by a relentless accumulation of harrowing stories. It made a welcome change when the mood shifted and some of the dysfunctional individuals were given a chance to speak for themselves. In “Empowered” a homeless sixty-eight year old amuses himself by walking out into the street in front of cars and making the drivers hit the brakes
An underdog also gets the last laugh in the throwaway give-away line at the end of the threatening looking and ominous-sounding prose poem “Ad Te Clamamus, Exsules Filii Hevae”.
A much bigger departure from domestic drama occurs in “Safari Not Supported But Your Prayer Is Important To Us” in which a couple of hackers are trying to locate God on the internet.
When it turns out that ‘SAFARI CANNOT ESTABLISH A SECURE CONNECTION TO THE SERVER WWW.GOD.ORG”’ there is still some theological consolation to be drawn
Well at least it’s not saying He doesn’t exist. That’s true. In fact it’s sort of acknowledging that He does exist or at least that His server existsEvidently the sky is not the limit of Bridgman’s poetic imagination.