Norbert Hirschhorn takes a long cool look at a new poetry & art volume from Australia 

 

antigoneThe Antigone Poems 
Marie Slaight with drawings by Terrence Tasker
Altaire Production and Publication (Potts Point NSW Australia, 2014)
ISBN 978-0-9806447-0-8
‚ÄėAdvance Review Copy‚Äô
pp 95 priced at £12.09  on Amazon, as of 17 July

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Two tales infuse this collection of poems and charcoal drawings. The first is that of Antigone herself, daughter of Oedipus by his mother Jocasta. As told by Sophocles,¬†her brothers killed each other in a bitter civil war over the inheritance of the throne of¬†Thebes. Neither was a paragon but their uncle, Creon ‚Äď now ruler ‚Äď gave Eteocles a proper burial while Polynices‚Äô body, to set an example to the nation, was thrown out to rot in the desert. Antigone defied Creon, both to uphold religious duty and to¬†honour her brother, and gave proper last rites to the body. Creon condemned her to death by immuration, but his insistence on law-and-order led to either law nor order:¬†Antigone, Creon‚Äôs wife Eurydice, his son Haemon (Antigone‚Äôs betrothed) all commit¬†suicide, Creon himself overthrown to end the House of Oedipus.

The second story is the origin of this book, rather more obscure than the classic¬†morality tale for which it is named. Marie Slaight and Terrence Tasker founded an art¬†studio in the early 1980s named Altaire Productions and Publications, a venue for¬†independent artists in the written and visual arts. Tasker died in 1992 at the age of 45,¬†and the company moved to Australia where Michael Tasker, a son perhaps, is the¬†Publication Manager (www.altaireproductions.com). ¬†The poems, we learn, were¬†written in the 1970s. The launch of both artists‚Äô work some three decades on may be¬†related to Tasker‚Äôs premature death: the book is dedicated to him. The relationship to¬†the Antigone saga, however, is in synecdoche, a woman‚Äôs voice of torment and rage.¬†According to the press release: ‚Äėa bold retelling of the ancient tale of defiance‚Ķan¬†intensely personal invocation of the ancient Greek tragedy‚Ķ‚Äô.

The book is lovingly made: thick stock, elegant font, handsomely bound, substantial¬†to the touch. Oddly, each verso page is entirely blank (but for the Roman numeral¬†page number). Six charcoal drawings, including the cover, are interspersed among the¬†poems: haunting, resembling African masks. The thirty-five poems, one to a recto¬†page and arranged over five ‚Äėchapters‚Äô, are nearly all in Sapphic or haiku-like¬†fragments, one as brief as seven words. They are demonic, unrelieved, driven. Line¬†and stanza breaks are meant to heighten the cry. A randomly opened page reveals:

      In exile

.    I walk on blood
.    I carve a vein
.    I bear sons

.    In exile

.    I carry screams
.    I seek revenge
.    I await my return
.    In exile.

Another:

.    Black.
.    A knives sorrow.

.    In my heart.
.    At the twist.

.    My blood’s life.

.    Black.

Or, post-coital fury:

     In this grey dawn
.   Only
.   The debauched loneliness
.   Of your thigh
.   Flung
.   Across mine.

In one long stream-of-consciousness three-stanza prose poem is a masochistic
evocation, writhing as if Leyda to Zeus’s swan:

I only want to purge of godawful pain– so close to losing me– he
has to gripРhe’s soРwhatРmovement is stronger, hotter, my entire
bodyРwhere’s the sunРwhere is heРhe’s not afraid, he knows, he
penetrates, he’s a foolРto leave me aloneРheat’s stronger, I’m
pulsing– waves of pain, pleasure– I‚Äôm his, what of it– thank god–
it’s timeРI can’t grow until he returnsРsunloveРagain, where is
he– I wish he would burn– my only love today was the sun– I was
in love when the sun took meРnow it’s goneРI’m cold…

Several poems offer up gnomic utterances, a kind of Kahlil Gibran gone sour:

.   We live our lives
.   The instant between life and death
.   To touch death always,
.   That is the sun.

Or,

.   All love pains
.   Are an aged protest
.   Wanting fresh surge;
.   Decrying the ancient throb
.   Of memories.

After such soaring, however, the final poem crashes down to bathetic resignation:

.   And why.

.   I wanted everything.

.   To live all lives, all deaths, encompass all women.

.   To smash every confine.

.   And what have I done.

.   I don’t know.

.   I have written a few words

.   Created a few images

.   Influenced a few lives.

.   I live at the corner of St. Lawrence and Pine.

.   I have three children.

It is as if Antigone had shrugged, gone home to knit, watch television.

The book has received rapturous reviews in major outlets. I regret to differ.

 

 

Norbert Hirschhorn  is a poet and critic whose website can be found at www.bertzpoet.com